Writing Task2 Topic - Crime (绝对词类)

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Publish：Feb 9, 2022

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Question Type 2：绝对词类

绝对词类题目指的是出现了all, best, most important, only, now, nothing, ban这些字眼。

‘The key to reducing crime is to have more police patrolling the streets.’ How far do you support this proposal? What other ways of reducing crime may be effective?

The key to reducing crime

address all issues 解决所有问题

entirely on topic 完全在主题上

One idea one paragraph

PEEP: point, elaboration, example, point

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雅思写作Task 2（大作文）备考体系

第一段：不同意增加警察巡逻是减少罪案的关键（开头段）
第二段：增加警察巡逻的力度有一定效果（让步段）
第三段：但加强巡逻不是减少犯罪的关键（反驳段）
第四段：提高犯罪的惩罚、加装监控摄像头、加强教育宣传（替代方案段）
第五段：不同意题目的论述（结尾段）

Crime & Punishment

1. 开头段 | 改写正文/明确观点

In recent days, the question of whether the main solution to reducing crime is to have more police patrolling the streets or not has been receiving a great deal of public attention. This idea may be initially appealing, but some analysis will show that it is not the key method and that other options are preferable.

whether … or not

I am not sure whether I will go to the party or not.
Tom is deciding whether go camping or not.

has been receiving a great deal of public attention

This idea may be initially appealing

it is not the key method and that other options are preferable.

2. 让步段 | 有定效果

This strategy will reduce minor crimes such as littering, but determined criminals such as thieves (thief) and robbers will find some ways to operate.

This means that, those bad attitudes are planned carefully or happened immediately, which would hardly control by patrolling police.

major vs minor crime

littering, thieves, muggers

3. 反驳段 | 不是关键

There are a number of reasons why having high numbers of visible police officers is not the key.

First 首先
by the state-of-the-art technology recent years, it must be said that many crimes are not carried out on streets. In fact, the number of criminal cases which are in the Internet, such as identify theft or financial hacking, become gradually increase, thus would be invisible to police patrols anyway.

There are a number of reasons

4. 替代方案段

There are several possible alternatives which could be considered.
It probably more effective to improve the efficiency of existing police rather than increase their numbers. For example, by better training in computer-based crime, police would rise the rates of detection for internet crimes.

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Furthermore, another viable option would be to increase penalties for criminals. This means that, These measures will deter those who intend to commit crimes, which leads to reduce crime rate.

5. 结尾段

In conclusion,

cheaper alternative options will be far more compelling to solve the root of the problem rather than police patrols streets.

By applying effectively options, it would be helpful to reduce crime.

compelling 英 [kəmˈpelɪŋ] 令人信服的

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